30# learnEnglish
亲， 建议改成：
For example, we all know that Muslims don't eat pork,
but not all of us know that they don't eat non-halal-meat, either.
下面再解释什么是 non-halal-meat。。
而且前面用了 we， 后边改用 everyone 就不好看了。。
关于宰杀： 保留这个动词就可以了， 把主语换成牛和羊即可。
29# learnEnglish
Did you ask me this question because you had seen I had written "I am using the pink phone"?
呵呵这样改就可以了，如果说还有要注意的， 就是在句子里连用两次过去完成是很少见的。最好分先后。
这两个动作还是有先后的。所以：because you SAW that I had written about using a pink phone..
31# learnEnglish
亲，个人同意Patton的建议。
beauty spot 让人首先想到的是化妆品和美容沙龙。
"heed" better be replaced with "attention". "pay attention" is an usual phrase for what you want to express. I almost didn't know what "heed" means in usual English, or should I say, American.
亲这个heed 用的不错！！
nobody paid any heed to 有一种nobody cared a shit 的轻蔑。。
这个语气表达得很好。。呵呵
另外这个词的难度级也比attention 高多啦！{:5_394:}
呵呵，可能吧。美语里的确不常见。另外美语里也不说nobody cared a shit, 而是说nobody give a shit.
New Concept is the worst book i have ever ever seen!
learnt a new word...beauty spot..
so surprised! it does exist!
剑桥高级学习词典：
beauty spot 1
beauty spot (COUNTRYSIDE) noun
a place in the countryside which is particularly attractive
beauty spot 2
beauty spot (SKIN) noun
a small dark mark on a woman's face that is considered to make her look more attractive
朗文当代英语词典
beauty spot
'beauty spot
n BrE
a place in the countryside which is famous because it is very pretty
Guests will be able to visit some of the local beauty spots.
a small dark mark on a woman's face - used when you think it is attractive
American Equivalent: beauty mark
牛津高阶英语词典
beauty spot
noun
(BrE) a place in the countryside famous for its beautiful scenery
(AmE also beauty mark) a small dark spot on a woman's face, which used to be thought to make her more beautiful
哈哈 偶家twin难得这么严谨治学一回 赞一下{:5_394:}
P.S. 原来美语里也有 美人痣 一说呀 {:5_387:}
learnt a new word...beauty spot..
so surprised! it does exist!
剑桥高级学习词典：
beauty spot 1
beauty spot (COUNTRYSIDE) noun
a place in the countryside which is particularly attractive
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mayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-9 14:47 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
30# learnEnglish
亲， 建议改成：
For example, we all know that Muslims don't eat pork,
but not all of us know that they don't eat non-halal-meat, either.
下面再解释什么是 non-halal-meat。。
...
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 10:09 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
have edited it. thank you so much{:5_335:} {:5_335:} {:5_335:}
29# learnEnglish
Did you ask me this question because you had seen I had written "I am using the pink phone"?
呵呵这样改就可以了，如果说还有要注意的， 就是在句子里连用两次过去完成是很少见的。 ...
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 10:12 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
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I am completely confused about "beauty spot" and "heed". {:5_382:}
Don't give a shit{:5_312:}
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"heed" better be replaced with "attention". "pay attention" is an usual phrase for what you want to express. I almost didn't know what "heed" means in usual English, or should I say, American.
aerostar 发表于 2009-8-8 15:01 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
This is what she said, I quote:"但是没有人理我".
Don't know how to describe “没人理"......{:5_371:}
亲这个heed 用的不错！！
nobody paid any heed to 有一种nobody cared a shit 的轻蔑。。
这个语气表达得很好。。呵呵
另外这个词的难度级也比attention 高多啦！{:5_394:}
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 17:03 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thank you{:5_363:}
Actually, I didn't really know what it means before.
Thank you for your explanation.{:5_335:}
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48# learnEnglish
亲，抱歉马上要出门，今天没时间多说。。
想先提一个小建议。。做个练习，看看是否能把日记里每两三句简单句重新组织一下，变成一句复杂写的句子。。
另外还有就是能不能每次改写时尝试用难度级高些的词汇替换简单的表述。。
比如洗衣服，to do laundry, to do the washing , 垃圾分类，garbage sorting,等等。。
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亲加油，每天坚持很不容易！！
uk is the worst country for garbage sorting...
48# learnEnglish
另外还有就是能不能每次改写时尝试用难度级高些的词汇替换简单的表述。。
# D6 ?0 u2 X' M4 W5 t比如洗衣服，to do laundry, to do the washing , 垃圾分类，garbage sorting,等等。。+ z/ V牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-9 21:36 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
have edited it.{:5_341:} {:5_341:} {:5_341:}
It's 0:50, Good night.{:5_359:}
uk is the worst country for garbage sorting...
mayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-9 22:17 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
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I don't know beauty spot either(don't read book carefully:dizzy:). would rather prefer place of interest
patton 发表于 2009-8-8 08:14 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Maybe most people who had some grounding in English don't need to learn Book One of the New Concept, so they don't know this.
New Concept is the worst book i have ever ever seen!
程普 发表于 2009-8-9 13:42 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Why do you say that?
Have you any evidence to support this statement?{:5_382:}
learnt a new word...beauty spot..
so surprised! it does exist!
剑桥高级学习词典：
beauty spot 1
beauty spot (COUNTRYSIDE) noun
a place in the countryside which is particularly attractive
...
mayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-9 14:47 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Thank you{:5_335:}
本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2010-3-18 04:46 编辑
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1. an email
2. my friend who..
my friend 是一个已知的特指，再加定语有点矛盾。。
建议：a friend of mine who..
3. because I won't have time ...
是想表达我不想去因为我这段时间没空么？
这句话全部按汉语习惯直译有点怪。
因为这里的所谓不想，不是不愿意，不喜欢的不想，而是暂时无此打算。。
亲是否能改写下这句？ eg. can't afford the time ..
4. 查阅建议用look up
5. 有个语篇上的建议，就是这一小段话，要有一个主题。。
这个故事让人觉得没写完，很多事地想问，到底去不去？
6. 地理方面无知，illiterate 用名词时 in geography, 形容词时 about G.
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是想表达我不想去因为我这段时间没空么？
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-11 23:57 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
How right that is!{:5_315:}
本帖最后由 learnEnglish 于 2009-8-12 01:46 编辑
1. an email
2. my friend who..
my friend 是一个已知的特指，再加定语有点矛盾。。
建议：a friend of mine who..
3. because I won't have time ...
是想表达我不想去因为我这段时间没空么？
...
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-11 23:57 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
I have modified it. Thanks{:5_341:}{:5_341:} {:5_341:}
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
“到底去不去？”
Finally, I still can't make up my mind.
57# learnEnglish
{:5_360:} 谢谢亲满足俺滴好奇心。。
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