哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
Dear Jay,
. h$ w  h$ i! _: W* K/ S! i5 s2 T6 r9 \5 _The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
The children practsed every day after school.
Then,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
! K2 w- p8 Z6 k& D5 L+ Y( D1 UJo was one of the pirated.
Then on his left.
Jack was very good in the band.
We all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
2 I# H; H% E- O: GAfter the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
# y$ T" H# I* ]- h! b* mWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
  |$ R' L* U  J0 T; z% RDo you habe shows in your school in New York?
9 m" L  X5 E' D9 qTell me about them.
( j( S% f) X. w! t  T) s5 E0 r9 _
Love, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
8 M6 m" I4 D2 Y- `All the children were very nervous.
, E1 ]7 E2 B5 v! y5 g5 p1 iI was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
# r, M! h, S1 N0 \The children practiced every day after school.
Then, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
4 T8 R5 y+ Z+ z' `5 n2 q! ~4 eJo was one of the pirated(?).
, A2 g  r  N# P& G3 U9 lThen on his left.(?)
" @9 A/ C7 G5 M& N/ S0 iJack was very good in the band.
, a) `9 c5 R) q. j$ R+ K, tWe all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
; y8 h! f3 ~! W9 S* @At the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows at your school in New York?
Tell me about them.
5 z+ _3 s% [" O, i, }& b% r3 q; N" ?
" h" d! }; W% S% @Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?

/ O6 S0 W! a) _# {Dear Jay,
/ G9 u, l! `& B- K" h/ R3 w3 ?The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
4 x1 q) o+ s* \! ]* k0 r: p$ lAll the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
5 J& n5 P* \3 U& q5 |) B: PThe children practised every day after school.
2 r( ^& ?& q$ q/ b# b& g# r, uThen, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
Jo was one of the pirates.
Then on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
6 x1 B! `7 \7 `1 a: f+ LWe all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
# |4 D# U$ @# V. J4 e6 CDo you have shows in your school in New York?
$ V4 S) y( O, `5 c; D' C) d# e( nTell me about them.

, K! R9 D% ]5 M7 t1 ?Love, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
: s/ v2 u. s' ?: z. t1 lThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
1 G/ e0 B, P- y5 ]; ?All the children were very nervous.
9 }0 ~" p; ]. Y0 r ...
5 n5 q( R0 p  O+ }8 B' f: Mkiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

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    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?

. Y+ e6 m1 G( h! {4 s$ Y9 b8 ?Dear Jay,
, h' q& ~) O7 H9 e* l8 l6 hThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the  ...
大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

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) w  m- P# m  K2 ~3 I9 P    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

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# b& I8 W) W% A  P5 }) B$ O    Spring Show
    Danke!