哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
# y: C+ k3 U  c/ j2 K0 t6 zAll the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
The children practsed every day after school.
Then,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
8 e; `4 t& n' `) n1 X! TJo was one of the pirated.
; L. J* L3 Q8 DThen on his left.
& Q" s" p& E) o7 SJack was very good in the band.
1 Q: `" D. J& ]* WWe all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
$ k# \; d1 {$ X9 k1 SAfter the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
: S+ }/ V) l: `! O+ p* nWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you habe shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.

Love, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
" @- V$ k! S0 ~; X$ @, v  kAll the children were very nervous.
+ J9 I' ?! j* U% @I was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
The children practiced every day after school.
Then, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
! D7 K- Q2 {( L1 \; NJo was one of the pirated(?).
Then on his left.(?)
9 {0 H4 x* k. }, \) s9 YJack was very good in the band.
& a! Z; G" h$ K  @5 N% vWe all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
7 i0 \* s3 d! c* [We are ready for the show tomorrow.
5 Z& [- s; _( `; t; @. KDo you have shows at your school in New York?
Tell me about them.
# y; ?6 w9 N- `1 t
Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?
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Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
9 r$ R. Y2 E/ K2 O7 `2 y+ r9 UAll the children were very nervous.
: c" N: C5 ?% n* d/ s% ?, dI am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
The children practised every day after school.
Then, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
; ~5 t4 a3 s6 CJo was one of the pirates.
Then on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
$ j7 A- c: l3 p8 @We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
+ E% B& U2 L9 Y/ FWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
$ B( z  o) B* Z4 h3 E  R0 ~Do you have shows in your school in New York?
  W7 S. f) n+ a  d+ s5 DTell me about them.
8 c# T) d. Q% ~$ N
% h1 i  T) }8 B4 A8 ^. I! _5 KLove, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
2 |* g+ V; h$ Z2 `$ wThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
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0 D1 @8 `1 I( Xkiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

: h) |5 ^3 _# O3 @' g/ q. H    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?

# U2 A) }: A! V& r( z9 ADear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the  ...
大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

& Y& X% g. n3 T    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

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% C4 n4 X# h) Z5 K' q' a- }    Spring Show
    Danke!