哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

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- ]4 j5 \/ `% ^请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
- B5 S" H2 V% \2 qDear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
$ ]" `* L$ s5 L0 S$ k) z1 x$ RThe children practsed every day after school.
Then,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
9 W6 }* g# P" s/ r2 F( W- ZJo was one of the pirated.
  {3 Q2 j2 j9 G6 \/ C7 RThen on his left.
Jack was very good in the band.
# M8 I5 X7 x- {We all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
After the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you habe shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.
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Love, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
9 V5 A9 `; K- cThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
& T; r: w) G: }# D  u8 |3 H1 YAll the children were very nervous.
I was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
5 P0 L" O* I" F# t- A* T% dThe children practiced every day after school.
8 m% ~8 q3 k& [Then, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
+ C' {( I9 l/ U. iJo was one of the pirated(?).
Then on his left.(?)
7 Z; |$ y( S' V. q& `, O/ gJack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
& M9 F. |) w' M0 r! ?& x9 eAt the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
4 |! n" B& \& _+ m7 rWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows at your school in New York?
Tell me about them.

Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?
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% G5 g6 ?% N! y7 ?: LDear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
% z1 K% _1 N8 yAll the children were very nervous.
& D+ j/ t4 S6 Z, C5 i6 \" S$ i  cI am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
The children practised every day after school.
1 C+ M  Z! ^4 X- o! oThen, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
3 o) g" [# L6 Q* bJo was one of the pirates.
7 J: o) u8 Y% {& P9 J6 KThen on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
; h6 c  O9 g5 s2 G" M( D# B. N* L& ~We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
8 |" G. N( h# H! hDo you have shows in your school in New York?
% ]+ J( l9 y  b# Y/ NTell me about them.
4 u. U5 Q6 U9 e( Q
Love, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
2 N" L  e3 Y( j( RAll the children were very nervous.
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% f* E7 H) x+ r8 [kiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

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: h: r, v& Q2 i    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?

Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
2 R( f5 u4 C: [- oAll the  ...
2 L  Y) w" ~! V" u2 f大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

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* u; d. q& G: p* u7 b    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

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    Spring Show
    Danke!