哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

& _. t7 F" w3 ]2 ~6 w请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
. B3 R) W# B; G5 G( D& _, XDear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
4 d+ m# v9 I. G6 C, C/ O8 l' iAll the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
5 }1 ]6 v" f" H6 d: ~9 rThe children practsed every day after school.
% l0 U2 h3 e9 K6 `/ v$ L* AThen,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
: O7 f. T* z% M2 o- p/ sJo was one of the pirated.
$ S+ o4 i8 o2 l* fThen on his left.
/ T% I- U% N: r& b: EJack was very good in the band.
1 v1 i( \9 `2 p/ zWe all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
After the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
6 B# R1 d0 b' T- m4 I1 j! EWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you habe shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.
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$ I$ h2 ?/ I* ]$ X# p3 hLove, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
The children practiced every day after school.
5 F( v+ |: q* G, k0 d. M! ]Then, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
* r4 u# n% N1 Z9 P( H" W! \2 xJo was one of the pirated(?).
/ i- Y0 u4 U" ~& J3 m( _! n3 sThen on his left.(?)
Jack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
3 b+ F3 O4 `- P! P' }At the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows at your school in New York?
, \. Q3 c. f% ~, n1 S: q) S" t0 BTell me about them.
4 x  j& u( @- M( ~2 d
5 t" x: `3 J; S3 ]! s/ f0 R- [( |Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?
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. y9 p" O9 j/ }' m* h' ADear Jay,
3 Y- V$ `* s, A+ CThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
* O1 `, x, i2 M; n' a! uI am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
/ Q+ X" X- F6 n1 E9 U0 k, YThe children practised every day after school.
Then, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
) ^+ ^: x+ K# FJo was one of the pirates.
Then on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
* f% y4 [' d+ q3 e3 v. W+ MWe all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
+ r) |# e: p2 y  V+ q- V/ wDo you have shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.
+ @% O2 p* ]" o' q* \
5 k9 r" S6 C- U6 w4 X) K9 M7 V5 j1 ELove, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
- v8 J" @6 P- bThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
2 z4 K4 A& `2 ^' PAll the children were very nervous.
& d$ W2 M3 u% ~ ...
) J& _& V/ }6 C, C0 Y8 u' zkiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

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2 R- K* j3 W; }- i3 V    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?

Dear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the  ...
( X/ c( O& c1 N: v  t; T大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

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: F3 W, ^, i/ x% A    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
3 m# F* @: [6 e* xitsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

    Spring Show
    Danke!