哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

& @2 k2 w, l, T: A" M0 s8 v请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
Dear Jay,
, p2 q3 n5 t& n. m3 {% g8 @; dThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
3 C" U; e3 f: V8 H7 ]$ x* ?% YAll the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
$ D( a* O& L6 e$ C9 TThe children practsed every day after school.
& y! H9 J3 p3 p% E" t" ]Then,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
Jo was one of the pirated.
% h  Z* I& ^4 A& [4 LThen on his left.
Jack was very good in the band.
# @. Y; A! p7 p7 @+ c8 z3 C- ]We all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
After the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
0 N  r' k# p* X% EDo you habe shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.
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1 Q# J2 A# U  i! k0 p( F+ iLove, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
6 B3 d" n% a% w* ]7 s2 {$ a, iThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
& i  F) k0 u. d" A3 S  H! RAll the children were very nervous.
I was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
The children practiced every day after school.
( c8 [' e3 }: `% L/ a; MThen, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
4 n) F! k3 A  U6 o9 PJo was one of the pirated(?).
4 k! X" F2 u0 b& ^9 zThen on his left.(?)
Jack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
We are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows at your school in New York?
" B6 Y$ r4 G: s/ l# \( A( S, p: QTell me about them.
& c# A. e; w7 |, x/ o4 @
Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?
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# I0 H5 \: g/ r2 H: YDear Jay,
$ P4 ^. ?# |) wThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
  c/ s8 c1 K9 r5 g4 }& }All the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
The children practised every day after school.
Then, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
Jo was one of the pirates.
Then on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
  d% n, n5 L9 [( D4 N8 cWe all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
6 U( }( m& Y5 S$ Y4 ^& N0 FWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
+ h& ~' O4 m/ QDo you have shows in your school in New York?
( |: B: ]4 i) G: D* ITell me about them.

& J! I5 z5 e9 p6 JLove, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
3 h+ I  ?, _# NThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
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kiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

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    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?

Dear Jay,
! p6 Z$ Z" k5 b+ oThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the  ...
' u  w- o) {& w' ]) d+ t大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

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0 a9 B& Y( R8 E& S, c0 q0 Q) }$ `! d
    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

: l" R, R3 K1 R; d    Spring Show
- r# o: J/ N9 f3 O" H( Q    Danke!