需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
And she sees her cat first.
She goes to thestation by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
+ ], T  A" d* r" r' q7 S/ d' X0 BIn the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
- Y+ f5 |$ N- N. s) U0 l4 lAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
" e& u9 I  u2 A8 g% gAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
- a5 w; a. H, R! |1 wIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
  H7 \) s$ ]- q4 `- H0 n. jShe arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
: y# x+ x: M. r. Z( k/ T& eThere a friend was waiting for her.
2 w  O9 L* u6 @4 SAsk eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
& ?3 R4 C% l) i, e# m, b' o  MThen ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
' x9 v' x0 l! B# [/ `- `5 o( NAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。试试。
7 b! |7 n) {2 ~! Y3 JThe friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
1 ]* N2 m8 T, @3 bThen they went shopping.
At 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
2 i6 }2 ?* F3 @3 GAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

8 P: Q* F3 }) _( K. L' e% L) a" K; f最后几句也搞不清。 ...
% n/ H6 N" L/ t- aitsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
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foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

    Danke schoen!