需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！

. z' @: |$ H5 `2 k' XDaisy is getting up at 6.30h.
And she sees her cat first.
She goes to thestation by car.
5 @1 W9 v- I8 X# {At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
3 t" Y6 I2 F: aShe is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
1 w, R# N. y6 a/ k5 a# vAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

' k) e' ^6 O* w/ Z4 S6 k2 ADaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
9 f3 }' t: ~4 S- m. L/ _Then, she goes to the station by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
) A# }- J" |) @9 eIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
; `9 B% h5 }: J! {0 |  y) EShe arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
' |6 U- G- w7 _0 gThere a friend was waiting for her.
* u9 `7 |+ o/ ]$ EAsk eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
) D5 |4 ?' [! |4 \! n" [" o# fThen ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
/ o" z0 f6 d2 R+ o- WAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
) V; D$ U# g* uThen ask shopps.
  W" T  v/ C* F5 @; Q+ r1 E+ X+ OAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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# ]2 v8 R* S5 n6 w' H  ?( K最后几句也搞不清。试试。
1 F6 O' \" {/ C% m7 G& dThe friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
8 F0 r' ?1 r- u4 N! w& [5 d) wThen they went shopping.
" T" w, o# v! Z' pAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

Ask eats in a china resteron.
5 M  m+ H& r+ `6 {: D3 o7 SThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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$ X' a  f0 i3 X5 Y7 Z% v5 X5 L5 qDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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