需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
* L9 F+ E1 N0 y0 N- H. l9 J, cAnd she sees her cat first.
9 @( w; {9 J. i9 h2 xShe goes to thestation by car.
5 A/ T1 a/ E, g( AAt 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
6 v: L4 D( A7 U% ]She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
/ m) h* r6 M; {5 g& H' K) uAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
Ask eats in a china resteron.
3 j. v+ m' B# lThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
6 J' A. d+ w) X+ O: RAt 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
9 n5 v( F2 P8 I+ f! x( ?. \There a friend was waiting for her.
% ?1 f; K" T2 R9 mAsk eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
5 ?3 J/ X7 x& G+ L) J$ g% ^At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
/ \; D5 W2 K* H/ NThen ask shopps.
: ^, U# c3 E0 d2 z( p* FAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

, {% F& Z6 `9 T4 D9 S6 m最后几句也搞不清。试试。
  ?2 S  E- Q5 C) g  B7 s: @9 [The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
/ v% b: m6 N( w9 K- {% Z, `Then they went shopping.
. j8 n( B) {0 F+ t# `8 e3 h% hAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
# _( V1 Z+ y" a, x5 p$ i  K  ~Then ask shopps.
5 d' S" e2 K! M, JAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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) d5 F8 z/ n$ K( k- V: WDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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. s" o+ K/ J( u/ B) ~# W    Danke schoen!