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jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
1 R0 T0 k; I+ D, e. E8 U3 I1 j( Z+ zAnd she sees her cat first.
She goes to thestation by car.
- z* i# i" ^- }At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
- C# \+ h2 J2 JAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
6 T$ K) F% @, n& v1 iAsk eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
5 d% l3 a( ?# u8 @; ~' ]( s8 w. H# ]Then, she goes to the station by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads newspaper.
/ C% A1 t6 o4 W1 VShe arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
0 k* K3 {! n" \7 ?8 L3 y3 I5 @Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
; e: f" Z) }! F3 q# E6 c/ mThen ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
, a, W: B, v& I* I% TAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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/ G% n* [% y# b5 g& j& Q  W最后几句也搞不清。试试。
- I# q4 g1 C: K4 CThe friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
Then they went shopping.
; ?, X$ j- c, SAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
! `3 l( q3 l# }$ _At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。 ...
6 k/ J) n$ Z- Nitsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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; X  Q. i: x- o" K+ _% s2 i$ E4 HDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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; T% J: @/ i! ]% Q0 t$ ]    Danke schoen!