需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！

) @+ u* e* s# F. \3 n0 U3 w" k& ~Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
9 x0 j/ V9 ^  N, T  I7 gAnd she sees her cat first.
4 M! G  n8 G% ]7 T& q1 yShe goes to thestation by car.
, \5 _* w+ g$ |0 p2 iAt 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
( R9 C$ {8 x3 l# [3 DShe is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
And a friend waits for Daisy.
Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
0 U+ |2 `" p, _- H7 ^+ YAt 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
, v6 R( M8 i0 }7 s$ G( L: IIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
& S: S2 U2 Y9 p7 n/ j7 }, c" PShe arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
: t' y% t9 |( ^6 A  _Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
& R( }1 T4 \5 E: U: L. X9 W! ?Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
+ x: u" x( Z# o8 \7 W% Q7 UThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

6 I7 t8 n1 C- R" D最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
/ t# p. j5 X8 `" A6 e9 QThen they went shopping.
' f/ i; r3 K) E4 P, uAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
% ?" }* O. L8 v! @: g6 gThen ask shopps.
7 A7 Z) r2 ]- L. S+ tAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
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foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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2 p4 D, c: E5 ]- d; N    Danke schoen!