需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
And she sees her cat first.
( `8 `& m. ^. Y4 S4 H* MShe goes to thestation by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
1 r4 y8 ]) f/ F% {% w! P3 B" z; QIn the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
And a friend waits for Daisy.
3 t2 T7 e/ w8 w; b, n2 A0 _- zAsk eats in a china resteron.
. k6 c, O& t3 c' U$ ^Then ask shopps.
4 @; F# C8 f2 \! T+ }5 _At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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9 A( p, u- R# `0 o/ ?0 g1 S: _Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
  T6 E9 b/ A8 L! g0 AThen, she goes to the station by car.
  ]; F0 ~7 q/ t6 [. A& Q) lAt 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
- \. v+ P+ f- ?6 s- x( _In the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
4 q+ x( P& V+ i! G% nAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
! W/ }7 X$ `" p, oThen ask shopps.
# z, O' W" n3 T# O3 R) AAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。试试。
: w- c6 h" y; H9 XThe friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
: X" r$ u% N6 n  V9 m4 }Then they went shopping.
At 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
# _+ v. x0 U3 dAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

5 W5 K, O% |' `4 dDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
- {" i  l! I( M2 F+ O7 i: d! sShe see ...
+ G; m) J2 L5 l( Vfoxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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    Danke schoen!