需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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9 z9 G8 ^- K5 W  ZDaisy is getting up at 6.30h.
( q" s( h% P, |  n6 jAnd she sees her cat first.
. e; n9 P9 D1 h# nShe goes to thestation by car.
1 T) C' V$ N) \3 @3 S8 W0 e1 ~! w3 NAt 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
And a friend waits for Daisy.
Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
* q9 y3 A+ w  ~4 P: qAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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% s! n0 _! Z- s" `, J, ~. @7 a2 HDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
7 `7 O$ H+ G+ |0 e! K5 s7 PShe sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
% o: Z5 a! ^: v) BAt 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
9 U! T9 f! K/ rIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
- d5 u4 z, ?1 P! L" V4 l. N. d/ [There a friend was waiting for her.
0 s0 N. M$ i; j" T5 x: TAsk eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
, E* ~. k5 I6 z/ TThen ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
9 q1 A4 ]9 R) Q4 u" m; g) B/ E& QThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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4 c" s! k. p8 V1 M2 l5 u+ b最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
Then they went shopping.
) x' `0 a& x/ o1 y1 ], C, `" rAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
2 p2 ?' D4 n2 DAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。 ...
* F3 Q5 D, W4 [2 k0 d8 h1 bitsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

    Danke schoen!