需要哥哥姐姐们帮我校正

jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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9 C, T, f  L" D- c6 WDaisy is getting up at 6.30h.
# Z4 [0 p- u- YAnd she sees her cat first.
( y" i7 w( Y2 T9 E5 F9 NShe goes to thestation by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
3 x- I9 _& T: I/ _, Z0 ]  uIn the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
% \' G8 g2 h: Z+ tShe is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
And a friend waits for Daisy.
! x5 H6 L$ v$ x' N7 i5 i' q# zAsk eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

" V3 C0 ~4 S* `( S0 jDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
( v/ A3 S& Q5 |7 m! tShe sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
' v- D. o! F# w  ?At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
: H2 f% B, d3 P/ Z' j( lAsk eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
( W$ C3 T& w8 f- o9 H# u8 m4 q! vThen ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
% |' h6 l3 t  t. Z! HAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。试试。
) q+ q9 l5 i% D7 p9 B+ i% l- OThe friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
Then they went shopping.
6 q9 W2 |7 x1 J9 ]5 d0 o+ g9 v0 wAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
& H9 K8 w. @* ]& m- \6 m$ YThen ask shopps.
2 a( b4 X/ Q( d2 {9 o0 RAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

0 B: ~4 h9 M& a% y. n, q最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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4 U, j8 \+ q8 D    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

0 C; |5 P2 q, [0 ^, wDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
) X# z% W# b2 w( O" efoxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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    Danke schoen!