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just something off the top of my head:
. open up sth pertinent to the statement in the topic, about property of laws/ morality is the supporting item
1 m: K" \, u, v! ]. avoid using "completely". this sets a sharp co ...
Chris81 发表于 2009-9-13 23:09

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thx for your comments
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1 Y4 e: Z1 d2 J* a1 eflexibility 是要考虑circumstance  不就是要及时不断修改low吗？
6 v; c. w7 ?1 [0 c  \结构我觉得也很清晰啊
% n! l7 g( h' e7 L* {0 g/ Y" l0 Kmorality我是想说不fair，太主观了

吃花生的大灰狼

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For your reference:

It has been widely recognized that laws could never be complete, even if they are amended frequently since future is not predictable.

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For your reference:
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' r' m2 P4 k, Z5 J$ W4 GIt has been widely recognized that laws could never be complete, even if they are amended frequently since future is not predictable.

6 z0 [  F2 x7 |7 h) t+ IThis is why institutions are essential.
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% M) f  @% i( B0 c) Q/ }  S我没说laws complete了呀。

吃花生的大灰狼

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我没说laws complete了呀。
Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-14 00:01

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6 {; }6 D0 D9 V, P9 z( V( uIt's just for your reference since you mentioned the adaptability of the law to circumstances.

No.
It's just for your reference since you mentioned the adaptability of the law to circumstances.
' t$ e8 w( Z' f; A& z吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-14 00:03

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thx

最后一次顶贴 看有没有人来拍

karlfriedrich

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when one of them is not functioning, we could still resort the other one.

I would say: when one of them does not work/function, we could resort to the other (one).
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$ C' @" ~" p/ d; {吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-13 20:53

agree with u
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/ I% V* b# L( fBut despite all that, we have to notice the circumstances are persistently altering, so do the minds of people
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for the above, I would like say
but despite of that, we have to....

agree with u
besides
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7 e* O/ n' V0 d# u$ M( Gfor the above, I would like say
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- V0 {. R  b* Q! C4 }, ]karlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:35

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karlfriedrich

suggestions for a writting in a examination.
. a# t0 W) k. N( J5 ?8 y" b1 m1.structure is very very important. usually, a article is made up of 4 paragraphes. one of them is conclusion.the other three are supporting points.
. y" p2 J# T) i8 b: N8 |, r2.examples or metaphor is a useful skill
3.the american do not like the saying: a coin has two sides. for them, either true or false, either good or bad.
9 o4 |) j$ r) j$ {2 H5 m, O9 t8 \just suggestions for the examination.

suggestions for a writting in a examination.
- U# v' q: Q' S# v$ e/ {5 h- `1 R1.structure is very very important. usually, a article is made up of 4 paragraphes. one of them is conclusion.the other three are supporting points.
4 x9 y4 R8 ^" E0 z3 B# g2.e ...
karlfriedrich 发表于 2009-9-15 23:48

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