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So, you'd better rephrase them.
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 12:37

. i: `% l3 {1 X/ n那我在看看

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I am uncomfortable with
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! j8 h3 y; }0 j3 ?- T7 M"the laws became so flexible that they were keen to "
"the problem ... with executability"

5 d" A6 y& X! ^; |* qOf course, I am not a native speaker.
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-9-16 13:05

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9 a/ K/ M7 I) {- O- w( T你是说就keen用的不好
6 x' n0 w. {, L7 ~& E: y8 s还是"in case that..., then"
% `4 y; x/ H8 ?! A"the laws became so flexible that they were keen to "
"the problem ... with executability"这3个都不好

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# ]( b6 F  h9 P- H" |3 Wkeen我改成tend to了，你觉得怎么样

吃花生的大灰狼

因为我的确不重视冠词的使用  用法也不一定清楚
冠词在我文章中都是爱写不写的
  t0 _& h2 V, m/ d既然那人这么热心帮我指出来
我就改改吧




现在改成了，不知道对不对
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' l$ v, i3 Q& A# q. _# t/ A9 t8 QAnonymous 发表于 2009-9-16 12:56

I am not sure. If I were you, I would use "the" in place of "a".

吃花生的大灰狼

你是说就keen用的不好
5 u  l4 E- M4 F; @还是"in case that..., then"
"the laws became so flexible that they were keen to "
& k, t' m3 Y  v+ ?9 S% j8 [  o"the problem ... with executability"这3个都不好
Anonymous 发表于 2009-9-16 13:11

# b0 C* _1 U8 H, c/ S8 z- }$ A4 s/ ZAll those three points make me confused.

吃花生的大灰狼

By the way, I think it should be "adapt to sth"

By the way, I think it should be "adapt to sth"
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* u8 S$ O# Y5 ?8 Q7 H- a改好了