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区别简短与简洁:
$ W6 ~" P$ H2 t写作时非常强调简洁,但简洁绝对不代表要你写一大堆简单句。英语本来是一个比较单调的东西,缺少了句式的变化,写作出来的东西只会显得松散而且显得缺少写作技巧。适当的要把握好长短句结合的写作,以求文章读起来比较适合读者。这里我要写几个我搜集到的一些句子和技巧,希望对你写作会有所提高。3 M! p% P. K) ^5 |7 f
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1) People and places changes as well. Tim felt it strongly. He had been away for many years.5 ^( O9 Q( X4 w% \5 U6 L
8 q! O7 w5 _1 C1 E5 [0 W3 iChange: On returning after a long term /many years, Tim had a strong feeling of how people and places change.
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) P1 {9 x* c: \3 Y+ w, q, o1 f2) Susan graduated last summer. She joined the First Super Group in Singapore soon after graduation and received an engineering degree from her college. 3 G N. D9 x3 z
" U9 P; s4 D' t0 k2 w9 d; q9 yChange a : After graduating last summer with an engineering degree, Susan soon joined the First Super Group in Singapore. 2 C; d+ J( v7 j$ h
/ ~. f) Q2 D: B6 I' W) pChange b : An engineering degree-holder, Susan joined the First Super Group in Singapore last summer soon after graduation.
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Or : change c: Having graduated with an engineering degree, Susan joined the First Super Group in Singapore last summer.
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这里就要讲讲一点小的变化技巧:我们中国人习惯于用who, that, which之类的定语从句,但不习惯用以上例2中的用法。2 b号中用到了一个是介词结构加主语加谓语 的用法。很多时候请在写句子时,都要想想你的几个简单句根据逻辑结构是不是能变化一下,以此来代替。 o# O& D' \, c4 T
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2C则是用到了状语从句,加主语,加谓语的写法。这种写法的好处就是,having作为伴随状语起到独立主格结构的作用,避免了用after(我们中国人最喜欢就是用AFTER来写句子,对不?不怪自己没学,是老师没教更好的写法而已)的从句。大家有机会请无论如何要仔细品味一下2B与2C的写法。
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0 R S5 w0 f8 B4 c留个小作业吧,有兴趣的请继续跟写。请尽量将下面句子合并。0 T: c5 {# H# e: @! A4 P
1) Snow White did her chores with a smile. Often she would sing while she worked.& }4 ]. k, A/ M, f# `
2) Memory is one of those abilities that we take for granted except when it fails us. So, memory is like digestion in this way (去掉SO,注意,so也是写作时尽量避免的)
- N) ~% n% c+ h3 I3) Linda sat there. Her beautiful coat was still wrapped around her against the cold 6 u: @. O4 }0 q3 E
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