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我们由于从前在学校里学习英语时老师们过份的强调了从句的作用,让好多同学们常常把but, if, although , even though, so…that, in order to之类的词用了个透。这些词不是说不能用,只是说如果你有更多更好的写法与代替方法,则应该考虑更其它。其实好多人以为英语写作或者英语的文章无非就是这些几个词语,外加一堆生词堆砌,这是误解。英语写得好的人,简单的词语排列组合时,采用长句,短句相结合的写法,完全可以避免掉这些口语中出现最多的从句。
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6 z) `3 G: q; z在这里我想写一点代替的写法,希望对大家英语写作有所提高与见识。同样还是留点作业给大家,请积极试写。; y5 g3 |7 y9 S
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But
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7 B, u' ` w& U5 W, [我们比较喜欢BUT,因为它短小又容易用。如果要避免它,请换个思维来改变你的句子,下面是几个例子,当然改变的方法非常多,不要只局限于以下几种方法。 n J# V! y W3 P5 j
% ?+ a4 o" E _) C+ H3 l1) The classroom was silent, but suddenly a girl started to cry9 R9 E. i% v m0 s
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6 K5 ^- [- h7 d, z* Q8 {2) It was meant to be a wonderful day but it turned out to be a disaster.
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3) The movie “The Sound of Music” is about a big family , but it is more than just that
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4) It is not his method but his attitude that holds him from becoming successful" w$ u. O, B, f% ?/ Y% V4 O
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5) I feel extremely tired and want nothing but a meal and a bed. ! w. s; V, t' h$ b
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Change: I feel extremely tired and want only two things: a meal and a bed. . i: ]- [# A, R& h& ?: r
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1) All students want to go there, but she does not want to do so.
3 k0 Q( Q( t9 _- x2) We have various kinds of food to stay healthy, but the most basic are carbohydrates, fats, and proteins.
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还有其它几个从句词比较although 等,我后面慢慢写来。欢迎大家都积极帮助我搜集材料或者提供不同意见! |
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