看到一篇新闻，感觉莫名其妙，谁来帮我解说一下，我是不是理解错了

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w  ww.theonion.com/articles/new-preventative-drug-would-kill-people-before-the,28433/
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New Preventative Drug Would Kill People Before They Get Alzheimer's
4 q9 l0 N& P" g, iJune 6, 2012 | ISSUE 48•23

0 [6 T" F+ @" E5 ^) ?- z3 t- P7 rCalling it the single greatest breakthrough to date in Alzheimer's research, the U.S. Food and Drug Administration announced Monday the approval of Proneva, a new medication that prevents the degenerative brain disorder by killing individuals before its onset. "Clinical trials have shown that a single dose of Proneva can end the lives of patients who otherwise would have developed a serious and life-threatening illness," said FDA spokeswoman Sandy Walsh, explaining that in a recent study Proneva successfully prevented Alzheimer's in 87 of 87 people who were administered the drug. "For the millions of Americans who already suffer from this disease or have shown early signs of dementia, we recommend commencing treatment as soon as possible." According to Walsh, preliminary research also suggests Proneva may be equally effective at preventing cancer, AIDS, and heart attacks
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conkydlcmacro

还好楼主厚道，给出文章出处。
: y0 M+ }! ?' e, C7 w6 X* IOnion 的搞笑新闻不要拿来当真的讨论好不好。
9 g* C3 y# m% a9 a4 Q' Q1 q在Onion上，天天都是愚人节。坑爹啊。

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conkydlcmacro 发表于 2012-6-26 22:01
还好楼主厚道，给出文章出处。
Onion 的搞笑新闻不要拿来当真的讨论好不好。
5 k) J/ L/ }8 S6 p! K& y% G在Onion上，天天都是愚人节 ...

0 G1 {, X* D! w# J* w2 T& b0 c2 w感谢感谢！原来onion是个有名的搞怪新闻网站？我是觉得文章奇怪，所以找到原出处的。
; C6 S# L& j. R0 M( F, @这是一个作业，要分析篇章结构，结果另一个小组选了这篇文章。这可怎么分析呀！！

conkydlcmacro

好玩。把题目发来看看，俺很感兴趣。

conkydlcmacro

都说的是搞笑的：
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先用一句话说出主题：
+ i' f5 _0 ~. Y8 W阿尔兹海默症预防和治疗的最最重大突破：Proneva 能在你得上阿尔兹海默症之前把你灭掉。

' q* ?9 r: N4 X7 w! D, |& ?! F然后给出细节（证据，数据）
临床显示一个剂量的Proneva就能得病之前干掉你。FDA官员说预防成功率100％（87个人被测试人中有87个成功）。也推荐出现早期症状的病人赶快使用。
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最后还给出一些展望：
最后也推荐其他疾病患者尝试，包括爱滋，癌症和心脏病。

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conkydlcmacro 发表于 2012-6-27 09:30
& ?2 ~' F' c4 _3 Y1 k  C; p都说的是搞笑的：

先用一句话说出主题：

这个文章太欢乐了，可是要做成presentation讲出rhetorical analysis，我就不觉得欢乐了。
rhetorical analysis 要分析每句间的关系，先把每句标上号码，便于分析。然后哪句是nucleus，哪句是satellite，最好发掘深层意思，看看作者是怎样通过句子的罗列表达观点。。。。
有个软件可以用RSTTOOL345
欢迎mm跟我详细讨论下

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0) New Preventative Drug Would Kill People Before They Get Alzheimer's
1）Calling it the single greatest breakthrough to date in Alzheimer's research,
2) the U.S. Food and Drug Administration announced Monday the approval of Proneva,
3) a new medication that prevents the degenerative brain disorder
/ m( |: j1 }- [% M2 d4) by killing individuals before its onset.
5) "Clinical trials have shown
3 B" m3 g, n! Z' l6) that a single dose of Proneva can end the lives of patients
( o2 ?  ?* B/ g6 N# ]7) who otherwise would have developed a serious and life-threatening illness,"
8) said FDA spokeswoman Sandy Walsh,
9) explaining that in a recent study Proneva successfully prevented Alzheimer's in 87 of 87 people
+ r9 S( W  o% Q10) who were administered the drug.
1 {5 b; v; Z" s  U: s11) "For the millions of Americans who already suffer from this disease
12) or have shown early signs of dementia,
13) we recommend commencing treatment as soon as possible."
14) According to Walsh,
! y$ {6 w. I- V: \15) preliminary research also suggests
16) Proneva may be equally effective at preventing cancer, AIDS, and heart attacks.

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我把文章先分成几个大chunks
1到10，11到13，14到16
; d- i4 s- d1 x" v" f/ \其中1到10又分出两个小chunks：1到4，5到10
然后继续分，找到每个chunk最重要的一句话，就是nucleus
大chunk之间要分析关系，每个句子之间也要分析关系。
mm觉得1到4哪句话最关键？这几个大分组间什么关系？

conkydlcmacro

这样细啊？半句也当一句？你学什么专业的？不真不知道能提供什么样的帮助。

' F3 y1 j* k5 d, N, _% w0－4 是文章主旨（3 是Nucleus）； 5－13 是展开（67是nucleus），14－16是展望（16是nueclues）。
& K/ q! R! w' q4 U" v, C, Q其中5－13又可分为5－10，证据，11－13，应用。
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我学语言学。先去上课了，回来继续讨论哈。多谢多谢