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程普

楼主坚持在这个贴里写日记吧。。。今天没红包了，明天补

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楼主坚持在这个贴里写日记吧。。。今天没红包了，明天补
) a* C+ W- \* ^* D; e程普 发表于 2009-8-4 00:10

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5 @  h2 Y2 k4 M* JOK.Thank you for your encouragement.

吃花生的大灰狼

Tomorrow evening,
6 r$ T- B% C0 k$ E- HI am going to attend somebody's birthday party.
I feel so bored,
I don't want to go at all,
because I knew none of them,
even the birthday person.
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- T' p/ |" A. n  O5 n  t- hBut,I must attend,
becaus ...
% u1 j! |/ n* u; P4 d; m8 LlearnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-3 23:55

Great! It's an effective way to practice and improve English.
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' h+ d0 ]7 |3 W1 N! |; kIf you have to attend the party, just try to enjoy it as much as you can.
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I wish you an agreeable birthday party.

juttazhu

英语都真好
虽然我看懂了

learnEnglish

Great! It's an effective way to practice and improve English.
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If you have to attend the party, just try to enjoy it as much as you can.

I wish you an agreeable birthday p ...
吃花生的大灰狼 发表于 2009-8-4 00:48

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Thanks for your wishes.
I'll try to enjoy it.

learnEnglish

英语都真好
8 y% s/ Q% M9 V9 \! o2 Ejuttazhu 发表于 2009-8-4 06:25

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Can I take it as it's ironic?

多小米

But,I must attend,
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and he is a important person for me.
0 K; ~! A0 E! U2 wlearnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-3 23:55

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0 T$ z* B/ V. f2 t% a1 q( q2 abetter:
but i have to attend it, because the birthday child has invited me through an important friend of mine.

四线方格

better:
9 V3 E8 }, s' {1 B; k& jbut i have to attend it, because the birthday child has invited me through an important friend of mine.
% X: Z# A# r# @* X# U! u多小米 发表于 2009-8-4 13:09

- _5 {7 F* L0 e+ ~3 B! ?; Amaybe she meant that her friend is important for her????

多小米

maybe she meant that her friend is important for her????
四线方格 发表于 2009-8-4 13:18

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0 [2 _/ |' r3 J% d( Xyep, so what's the difference?
  _* x: p* G9 k* z( q4 m i think,"a friend who is important for me" is equal to "an important friend of mine"...

mayjiay28

ha! important person for me....
* D- B+ b# E* Uhow "important"
( m6 J7 [$ F# N+ e' osounds like potential bf...

learnEnglish

6 `) T2 W, t5 h6 v0 W, ~. {Thanks for 小米and方格's help.

# [( s/ O( f! E+ z# n  f' _I meant that birthday man is important person for me.
Of course,my friend is more important than him.
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/ s# |! r8 w* wThank 小米and方格 again.

learnEnglish

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四线方格

yep, so what's the difference?
i think,"a friend who is important for me" is equal to "an important friend of mine"...
多小米 发表于 2009-8-4 13:30

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四线方格

My cellphone is very strange,
when it is in turn-off mode,
the alarm clock in it still works.
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% ^8 K& I3 v2 o" @; @Last night,I have already turned the cellphone off,
but this morning,at eight o'clock,
it rang.
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+ v6 X9 B8 ?4 y; f, `learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-4 14:31

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Could u please tell me how old u r?

learnEnglish

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Could u please tell me how old u r?
四线方格 发表于 2009-8-4 21:37

Do you ask me this question because you saw that I have written about using a pink phone?
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. }8 }$ W4 {- TActually,it's the color of the rose.
+ }0 a# H9 Y* r9 vI wrote"pink/purplish/reddsh",because I didn't know how to describe that color.
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Indeed,black and white etc.,these color can give girls a mature look,
! a" @5 f8 N& s( o0 o' Tbut,sometimes,these mature color with some rose color will be ok,too.
& a* m* r0 Y% q5 k$ F- f0 Pbecause that way will make you look more pleasant.

learnEnglish

It is not a bug but a function to alarm even when mobile is off.
As usual, user could find an option in alarm settings to disable this function.
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I see.Thanks

learnEnglish

ha! important person for me....
2 m7 @( k4 ?7 t/ Yhow "important"
sounds like potential bf...
1 G1 z9 x+ A8 V* c$ Lmayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-4 13:52

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Actually,he is my hero

四线方格

Do you ask me this problem because you saw I wrote I used the pink phone?

Actually,it's the color of the rose.
) Y; }$ |: u- n1 \, zI wrote"pink/purplish/reddsh",because I didn't know how to describe that color.
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learnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-5 11:41

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I apologize if that question bothers u.
! E  b* D* {" s! SI just thougt u r very very cute. Maybe because of ur age?

learnEnglish

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lingling

LZ., good job!
I just doubt if sometimes you use more commas than necessary. For example, before OR and after BUT you do not need have a comma.

mayjiay28

good to learn the different culture~ look forward to ur diary 2morrow

learnEnglish

LZ., good job!
: I8 |- ]; C( p  X! kI just doubt if sometimes you use more commas than necessary. For example, before OR and after BUT you do not need have a comma.
# w' S( S4 p8 d1 M, O$ f) E& Qlingling 发表于 2009-8-6 17:09

" x+ d6 ~7 y3 H$ L; v1 S; ZThanks.I have just edited it.

learnEnglish

good to learn the different culture~ look forward to ur diary 2morrow
* O6 k2 u4 c" r# S7 z7 Tmayjiay28 发表于 2009-8-6 17:42

Thanks for your encouragement

牛奶咖啡

Thanks for 小米and方格's help.

I meant that birthday man is important person for me.
Of course,my friend is more important than him.
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' k# G  Y) n4 NlearnEnglish 发表于 2009-8-4 14:25

: p% ^5 @* ]- t/ l& Q. Q6 Nbirthday boy 比较常说的。

牛奶咖啡

17# learnEnglish

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8 D- u4 J' Q1 K6 `" {# u' U0 vDo you ask me this problem because。。
' m7 P' R* M& q  X5 ?7 P5 y 人可以ask question 也可以cause problem..通常不ask problem, 除非 ask for problem..

牛奶咖啡

21# learnEnglish
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+ @/ F+ r5 i4 s: h亲，有几条我就一起说啦
1. 关于 too tired but happy
6 U" R6 }3 `8 g/ E# S6 ?, }) h7 L这个汉语里的非常 直接换用 too 不太合适，因为too有导出下文否定含义的功能。。
另外这句话和下句直接最好用连词，比如表原因的，串成一句。不然整篇都是简单句的罗列，会觉得单调。
: Z; ]8 Y& g0 B1 J5 _3 S' b2. 关于牛羊肉，那个宰杀的动词应该和有生命的名词搭配使用，已经成了肉就不用杀了。。
7 Q; h4 Q( N! ^2 b6 Z6 _3. In other words, Muslims don't eat non-halal-meat, either.
5 f, M: ~. N" k3 I* ~, o4 R这个句子很好， 但是这个either 离前一个否定结构太远了， 读者未必能跟上亲的思路。。
4. brought some halal-beef and halal-chicken for himself.
+ \8 r! h+ K3 b" b; N2 Q 这句话里用 bring along sth. with sb. 比较好。。

learnEnglish

17# learnEnglish


Do you ask me this problem because。。
人可以ask question 也可以cause problem..通常不ask problem, 除非 ask for problem..
牛奶咖啡 发表于 2009-8-8 01:44

" ~8 B) j6 e& l+ _Thank you very very much
(Did you ask me this question because you had seen I had written "I am using the pink phone"?)

learnEnglish

21# learnEnglish
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亲，有几条我就一起说啦
1. 关于 too tired but happy
这个汉语里的非常 直接换用 too 不太合适，因为too有导出下文否定含义的功能。。
另外这句话和下句直接最好用连词，比如表原因的，串 ...
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I edited (1), thank 咖啡
) T( z4 T9 y& m  J" ~$ Y; ~(2)(3) don't know how to edit...
(4)I want to emphasize "for himself", not "for others"...

learnEnglish

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