发一篇原创的英语文章，讲自己是英语的落跑新娘，被德语GG拐走了~~~~~

经典小企鹅

       English and I


To some extend, it is now really difficult for me to describe the relationship between English and me. Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it—and I made it. Lovers? We were! Gone are the days when we stayed with each other for at least six hours a day and stuck to the so-called saying” we won’t be apart until we die ”.Couple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride ” .
$ n, A/ V7 g6 i% b' s8 S5 X/ M, ^0 kA poor runaway bride ,running away with German.
! L6 U+ x, t# N/ J$ s; rBut! I swear, that it is the last thing I want to see. I used to have a steady faith that I could balance the amount of time spent on English and German, that mastering two and even more than three foreign languages during the study in the university  for me was a piece of cake, that it would be a fantastic experience to indulge in the world of languages and that…
Stop! Recollections kill people.
5 n; _9 p- g% S9 I. `* j. O& S! fAnd the facts. About a week ago I looked up madly the use of the passive voice of English in a book called English Grammar. I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away. Forgetting is my bitter enemy. But the bitterest one is myself.
I just want to go back to my English. I want to be better. And I do think I have got the ability to realize it. What I need is time. So wait me, my English!

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献丑了，欢迎大家拍砖哦  $送花$ $汗$

life-movie

It is the same by me!

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原帖由 life-movie 于 2008-7-14 13:10 发表
8 Y! u$ P& w2 w5 G6 FIt is the same by me!

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$握手$ $握手$ $送花$

nightdream

english was, is and will always be my first lover
i am quite loyal$害羞$

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原帖由 nightdream 于 2008-7-14 22:06 发表
5 d( T. u# D3 i- menglish was, is and will always be my first lover
( ]; R" r! v: x  O( Q" y/ h( ^i am quite loyal$害羞$

& E5 y+ O+ s1 T& T* {$高$ $高$ $kiss$

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原帖由 Aquaspirit 于 2008-7-15 12:55 发表
英文最难的就是写作, 要达到母语感觉真是不容易的.

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wenyuan123

第三个单词，extent

neuron

Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
( V. N) S. [9 f' T3 R9 pmuch congratulation-->many congratulations
I will really mad-->I will really be mad
- j  Q3 X8 e0 W1 S# E8 W I could balance the amount of time spent on English and German--> I could find the best balance between English and German.
4 y  X& g# g' u/ \6 I$ E So wait me--> wait for me

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原帖由 wenyuan123 于 2008-7-26 15:56 发表
第三个单词，extent

$kiss$ $kiss$

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原帖由 neuron 于 2008-7-26 16:13 发表
Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
much congratulation-->many c ...

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5 }2 ?0 A: q5 `9 R/ y8 \* U太赞了！！！谢谢neuron亲啊！！！ 大鞠躬一个$m15$ $m15$

莆萝菲

只看了第一段，提几点小建议：
/ e2 ~) {$ u0 b4 [) a4 K2 k* y, eCouple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride”
couple 要改成 A couple， couple 是可数名词，单数形式要带冠词。同理，之前的"friend" 改成“friends”才好。
“we had received so much congratulation”这句不是很懂，lz想表达什么
9 F3 j$ ]7 }4 g“but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride””这句里的was应该用is 和am, 因为你现在是这个状态。
5 a( X9 C/ a: ^& J  x8 m“we won’t be apart until we die ”until 改成unless更合适, apart 做副词应用为apart from each other, 如果lz一定想用形容词，用separated 更地道。否则你这句话的表达too chinese english ^_^

一梦二十年

I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away.
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应该是 go mad,   后面我会用  slipping away.