发一篇原创的英语文章，讲自己是英语的落跑新娘，被德语GG拐走了~~~~~

经典小企鹅

       English and I
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To some extend, it is now really difficult for me to describe the relationship between English and me. Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it—and I made it. Lovers? We were! Gone are the days when we stayed with each other for at least six hours a day and stuck to the so-called saying” we won’t be apart until we die ”.Couple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride ” .
A poor runaway bride ,running away with German.
2 B- O! a0 [" g! _0 B& i/ pBut! I swear, that it is the last thing I want to see. I used to have a steady faith that I could balance the amount of time spent on English and German, that mastering two and even more than three foreign languages during the study in the university  for me was a piece of cake, that it would be a fantastic experience to indulge in the world of languages and that…
0 i5 Y& R# J( N2 C( d& ^Stop! Recollections kill people.
  P/ f, ]+ z# G+ M4 [; J1 m/ DAnd the facts. About a week ago I looked up madly the use of the passive voice of English in a book called English Grammar. I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away. Forgetting is my bitter enemy. But the bitterest one is myself.
  z5 l$ G/ O4 ?' p2 s3 \I just want to go back to my English. I want to be better. And I do think I have got the ability to realize it. What I need is time. So wait me, my English!

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献丑了，欢迎大家拍砖哦  $送花$ $汗$
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life-movie

It is the same by me!

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原帖由 life-movie 于 2008-7-14 13:10 发表
* t& e  p0 S/ C8 RIt is the same by me!

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nightdream

english was, is and will always be my first lover
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原帖由 nightdream 于 2008-7-14 22:06 发表
( z' H8 @+ c" y1 w; y  ^8 T- jenglish was, is and will always be my first lover
5 w7 h3 k4 \, V1 U: {1 Hi am quite loyal$害羞$

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原帖由 Aquaspirit 于 2008-7-15 12:55 发表
- A6 U2 v  t: U: s. T英文最难的就是写作, 要达到母语感觉真是不容易的.

是啊，深有同感$m7$ $m7$

wenyuan123

第三个单词，extent

neuron

Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
much congratulation-->many congratulations
I will really mad-->I will really be mad
I could balance the amount of time spent on English and German--> I could find the best balance between English and German.
So wait me--> wait for me

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原帖由 wenyuan123 于 2008-7-26 15:56 发表
& j+ `" g' K0 s, b; c2 J第三个单词，extent

$kiss$ $kiss$

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原帖由 neuron 于 2008-7-26 16:13 发表
# z5 v$ G  X0 h" P9 CFriend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
much congratulation-->many c ...

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莆萝菲

只看了第一段，提几点小建议：
. k; M6 a: \5 z- cCouple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride”
couple 要改成 A couple， couple 是可数名词，单数形式要带冠词。同理，之前的"friend" 改成“friends”才好。
/ T8 B# R  B, `4 o/ P  O0 s2 Q“we had received so much congratulation”这句不是很懂，lz想表达什么
“but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride””这句里的was应该用is 和am, 因为你现在是这个状态。
! \' }" V# n0 E& K0 ~1 V“we won’t be apart until we die ”until 改成unless更合适, apart 做副词应用为apart from each other, 如果lz一定想用形容词，用separated 更地道。否则你这句话的表达too chinese english ^_^

一梦二十年

I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away.

应该是 go mad,   后面我会用  slipping away.