发一篇原创的英语文章，讲自己是英语的落跑新娘，被德语GG拐走了~~~~~

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原帖由 neuron 于 2008-7-26 16:13 发表
5 s9 U1 i% J; t( a$ M% OFriend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
much congratulation-->many c ...

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太赞了！！！谢谢neuron亲啊！！！ 大鞠躬一个$m15$ $m15$

莆萝菲

只看了第一段，提几点小建议：
& H$ W2 n# T. L  F7 n2 T, ?4 ACouple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride”
couple 要改成 A couple， couple 是可数名词，单数形式要带冠词。同理，之前的"friend" 改成“friends”才好。
# W& N+ J% t( E+ v' Z“we had received so much congratulation”这句不是很懂，lz想表达什么
1 a. z) ~1 f, S$ S- N2 W“but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride””这句里的was应该用is 和am, 因为你现在是这个状态。
3 ^# D  L' O* {4 x- V“we won’t be apart until we die ”until 改成unless更合适, apart 做副词应用为apart from each other, 如果lz一定想用形容词，用separated 更地道。否则你这句话的表达too chinese english ^_^

一梦二十年

I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away.

3 v; ]0 `: d" `; \) f- e; ]应该是 go mad,   后面我会用  slipping away.